Concrete Examples in Writing Task 2

Many test-takers have great ideas for their essays, but they often struggle to support these ideas effectively.

Does this sound familiar?

Using specific, real-world examples in your essays can make your arguments more convincing and show the examiner that you really understand the topic.

It’s like adding seasoning to your food – it brings out the flavor of your ideas!

So, how do you use concrete examples effectively?

Here’s a simple approach:

1. Make your main point

2. Introduce your example with phrases like “For instance,” or “To illustrate this,”

3. Provide a specific, detailed example

4. Explain how this example supports your point

Some real IELTS-style questions:

Example 1

Question: “Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?”

Main point: “Compulsory community service can help students develop empathy and social awareness.”

Concrete example: “For instance, in my city, high school students are required to volunteer at local nursing homes for a few hours each month. Through this experience, many students have formed meaningful relationships with the elderly residents, gaining a deeper understanding of the challenges faced by different generations. This firsthand exposure to diverse life experiences helps students become more compassionate and socially aware citizens.”

Example 2

Question: “In some countries, the number of people who are overweight is increasing. What do you think are the causes of this problem and what measures could be taken to solve it?”

Main point: “One major cause of obesity is the prevalence of sedentary lifestyles due to technological advancements.”

Concrete example: “To illustrate this, consider the rise of food delivery apps. These apps make it incredibly easy for people to order fast food without leaving their homes. For example, in my neighborhood, I’ve noticed a significant increase in delivery motorbikes from various food chains, even late at night. This convenience often leads to people choosing unhealthy food options and reducing their physical activity, contributing to weight gain.”

Example 3

Question: “Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.”

Main point: “Schools can provide structured programs to teach social responsibility.”

Concrete example: “For instance, many schools in Japan have implemented a daily cleaning routine where students are responsible for cleaning their classrooms and common areas. This practice not only keeps the school clean but also teaches students about collective responsibility and the importance of contributing to their community. As a result, these students often grow up with a strong sense of civic duty and respect for public spaces.”

You can try to draw from your own experiences, things you’ve read about, or situations you’re familiar with.

So, next time you’re practicing for IELTS Writing Task 2, why not give this technique a try?

You can pick a topic, make your main points, and then challenge yourself to come up with concrete examples to support each one.

Now, I’m really curious to hear from you.

Share your thoughts, experiences, or questions in the comments below.