This is a practice question for IELTS Writing Task 2.
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task and write at least 250 words.
IELTS Writing Task 2#
Some people believe that governments should invest more money in preventive healthcare, such as promoting healthy lifestyles and disease prevention, rather than in treating illnesses. Others argue that funding should primarily go towards developing new treatments and cures.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Sample answer outline (mind map)#
Introduction
- You can acknowledge the debate between preventive healthcare and treatment-focused approaches
- State your position (balanced view with a slight preference)
Body Paragraph 1
Arguments for preventive healthcare mind map ideas:
- Cost-effectiveness in the long run
- Improved quality of life
- Reduced burden on healthcare systems
- Examples: anti-smoking campaigns, nutrition education
Body Paragraph 2
Arguments for treatment and cure development mind map ideas:
- Addressing existing health issues
- Potential for breakthrough treatments
- Economic benefits of medical research
- Examples: cancer research, genetic therapies
Body Paragraph 3
Balanced approach and personal opinion mind map ideas:
- Importance of both prevention and treatment
- Allocation of resources based on specific health challenges
- Integration of both approaches for comprehensive healthcare
- Examples: successful combination strategies
Conclusion
- Restate the importance of both approaches
- Emphasize the need for a balanced, context-specific strategy
Model answer (Band 8 style)
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With healthcare budgets under pressure in almost every country, governments must decide how to divide limited funds. Some argue that more should be invested in prevention, such as encouraging healthy lifestyles, while others believe the priority should be developing new treatments and cures. I believe prevention deserves a larger share, although medical research must not be neglected.
The case for preventive healthcare is largely economic and social. Many of the most common and costly illnesses, including heart disease, type 2 diabetes and some cancers, are closely linked to diet, smoking and lack of exercise. Campaigns that reduce smoking or programmes that make healthy food more affordable can therefore prevent thousands of cases, saving lives and reducing the long-term strain on hospitals. Vaccination programmes are another example of prevention that is both cheap and highly effective.
Nevertheless, there are strong reasons to fund treatment and research. Not every disease can be prevented; genetic conditions, many cancers and new infectious diseases require medical innovation. The rapid development of vaccines during the recent pandemic showed how valuable research investment can be. Furthermore, people who are already ill have an urgent and legitimate claim on public resources.
In my view, the two approaches are complementary rather than competing. However, because prevention reduces the number of people who need expensive treatment in the first place, shifting more funding towards it would make the whole system more sustainable over time.
In conclusion, governments should increase spending on preventive healthcare while maintaining solid support for research, as this balance offers the greatest benefit for public health.
Task Response
Both views receive full, supported paragraphs; the writer’s position (more for prevention, research still funded) is clear throughout.
Coherence & Cohesion
Clear paragraphing and signposting: “The case for…”, “Nevertheless”, “Furthermore”, “In my view”.
Lexical Resource
Health vocabulary used accurately: preventive healthcare, long-term strain, genetic conditions, complementary rather than competing.
Grammatical Range
Mix of complex sentences, non-defining relative clauses and causal structures (“because prevention reduces…”).
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Evaluation criteria
- Task Achievement
- Coherence and Cohesion
- Lexical Resource
- Grammatical Range and Accuracy
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