This is a practice question for IELTS Writing Task 2.
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write at least 250 words.
Write about the following topic#
Some people believe that the rapid growth of tourism in many countries has had a negative impact on local cultures and traditions. Others argue that tourism helps preserve cultural heritage and promotes cultural exchange.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Sample answer outline#
Introduction: Present the topic and state your position
Main body paragraph 1: Discuss negative impacts of tourism on local cultures
Main body paragraph 2: Explore positive effects of tourism on cultural preservation
Main body paragraph 3: Provide your own opinion and potential solutions
Conclusion: Summarize main points and restate your position
Model answer (Band 8 style)
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Tourism has grown rapidly in many countries, and its effect on local cultures is widely debated. Some believe it has damaged traditions and local ways of life, while others argue it helps preserve cultural heritage and promotes exchange between cultures. In my view, tourism can do both, but when well managed, its positive effects are greater.
Those who see tourism negatively point to the commercialisation of culture. Traditional ceremonies may be shortened or changed to entertain visitors, and handicrafts are sometimes replaced by cheap, mass-produced souvenirs. In popular destinations, rising property prices can push local residents out of historic neighbourhoods, which become filled with hotels and souvenir shops. Over time, the authentic daily life that once attracted visitors can disappear.
On the other hand, tourism can provide the money and motivation to protect cultural heritage. Entrance fees and tourist taxes fund the restoration of temples, castles and museums that governments might otherwise neglect. When visitors are interested in traditional music, dance or crafts, young people have an economic reason to learn these skills, keeping them alive. Tourism also encourages cultural exchange, as travellers learn about local customs and hosts learn about the wider world.
In my opinion, the outcome depends largely on management. Limiting visitor numbers at sensitive sites, involving local communities in tourism decisions and ensuring that profits remain with local businesses can maximise the benefits while reducing harm.
In conclusion, tourism can threaten local cultures through commercialisation and overcrowding, but with careful management, it is more likely to help preserve heritage and promote cultural understanding.
Task Response
Both views are discussed with relevant examples, and the opinion is conditional (“when well managed”) and consistently argued.
Coherence & Cohesion
Clear structure and linking; the final body paragraph directly addresses the problems raised earlier.
Lexical Resource
Vocabulary: commercialisation, mass-produced, authentic, restoration, cultural exchange.
Grammatical Range
Range of grammar: relative clauses, passives, conditional clauses (“When visitors are interested…”) and comparatives.
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Evaluation criteria:#
Coherence and Cohesion
Grammatical Range and Accuracy